It’s a logical conclusion
No time for turning back
Obsession’s shut the door on you
That’s a thing they call payback
Obsession’s not a perfume
It’s just a self-centred private curse
An ever-growing cancer
You’re not the cure; you’re not the nurse
You’re in denial about the gathering up
Of all the hearts you led astray
Yet when those broken hearts cried for you
You pinned them on a green hill faraway
You turn sweet dreams into nightmares
You can do it with just a smile
You sold your soul for a lock of my hair
Kept it hidden away in some old file
It’s a logical conclusion?
Is that a window or just a crack?
Obsession’s outside looking in
‘If you want it darker’ paint it black
(a ‘work in progress’ fresh off the pen lyric waiting for a bit of melody magic)
The new album will be on its way soon but for now here’s and old number, the original version of ‘Sunlight & The Dust’ – as opposed to the version on my ‘Dream Rescuer’ album. I hope you enjoy;
https://soundcloud.com/zoolon/sunlight-and-the-dust
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Well Zoolon, I am waiting for the melody…. WAITING !!!!
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It is singing surprisingly well. Well it was at midnight. I’ll have to see if it makes the cut this morning.
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George, blown away by your music and lyrics. Love them.
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Thank you.
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Love it!
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A hit in the making Zoolon, keep up the good work, keep knocking on those doors – one will open.
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Thanks. It is singing OK. I’ll play some more with it over the weekend. Fingers-crossed.
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I like your music!
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I also like the poem!
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Thank you Resa
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Great post!! Every element!
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Thank you for reading and listening.
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Always my pleasure, George!
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Great poem, George. Obsession is a self-brainwashing, and it does no good. Looking forward to the final version.
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Thank you. It’s getting there. For once I’ve had a creative week without being my usual scatterbrained self.
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The second I read “paint it black,” the Rolling Stones came to mind. Talk about brain-washing…and I don’t even like much of their music! Pish. Anyway, I’m wondering about the instruments for “Obsession”–guitar, you think? Piano doesn’t seem like it will carry the right sort of weight. ‘Course, I could be full of it, and you can tell me to piss off…
There’s something about “Sunlight and the Dust” that makes me think of a beach front day just gone to hell, and the beachgoer is just ground into the sand, bitter, watching the sunset and full of darkness inside.
…maybe I need more coffee this early in the morning…
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I don’t rate the Stones that much either. My creativity has stayed with me for days now (long may it last). I hope Obsession makes the cut for the new album. It sings well to acoustic now I’ve played around with it, but I want much more for this one. I’ll let it go where it takes me. The Sunlight & The Dust was a song I made out of one of dad’s poems. This first – demo – version still seems popular within the family. I thought I’d give it a run out.
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It was worth the run, no doubt. 🙂
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I hope so.
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Obsession…what a curse indeed~
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Obsession is a bit like enthusiasm – overrated sometimes.
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So true!
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Great lyrics waiting for the melody.
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Thanks I appreciate it.
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My pleasure
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This was a really great piece. So raw and powerful while being honest and heartfelt! Bravo.
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Thanks. As a lyric I have to play around with it a bit more. Glad you liked it.
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